ONE PLUS - You do a really good job making her scientific about everything. She looks at everything from a scientist's perspective and I think it's courtesy of your stint in biochem, it works out really well.
ONE WORK - I would rewatch the show while you tag some to work on her wording to make it more cohesive and les thesaurus-y. I know you're pulling her from a current canon point, and she's become less difficult to understand.
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ONE PLUS - You do a really good job making her scientific about everything. She looks at everything from a scientist's perspective and I think it's courtesy of your stint in biochem, it works out really well.
ONE WORK - I would rewatch the show while you tag some to work on her wording to make it more cohesive and les thesaurus-y. I know you're pulling her from a current canon point, and she's become less difficult to understand.