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[objectofhope.livejournal.com]

ONE THING YOU LOVE / ONE THING TO WORK ON.

Tell people one thing you love about them and one thing you think they should work on.
One and one only! Keep it balanced, and tag around!
Obviously, participation is optional. Be nice, people. This is supposed to be constructive.

Comments

[objectofhope.livejournal.com]

Me me me? :>

I play honorregained, objectofhope, and prototype_mage.

[halfherfather.livejournal.com]

I love your Zuko. Especially his relations with Morrigan. It's snarky, and very unexpected.

On the other hand...compared to the levels of activity Zuko gets, Rei and Vivi look a bit lonely.

[fillmydarksoul.livejournal.com]

Rufus ShinRa
Kuchiki Byakuya
Cross Marian
Trish
Temperance Brennan
Larsa Solidor
Cain Knightlord
Abel Nightroad

[autophoenix.livejournal.com]

BRENNAN:

ONE PLUS - You do a really good job making her scientific about everything. She looks at everything from a scientist's perspective and I think it's courtesy of your stint in biochem, it works out really well.

ONE WORK - I would rewatch the show while you tag some to work on her wording to make it more cohesive and les thesaurus-y. I know you're pulling her from a current canon point, and she's become less difficult to understand.

[stripping.livejournal.com]

Ahh, I'm going to be bad at this, I can't think of things to work on for most of you...

ewwgirls, cawing, bonywings, and defactonation.

In before 'get to your old tags, what's the deal Mini'. :( I wonder too.

[vivi]

I actually love how quick you are with tagging! Your tags never feel incomplete to me despite that; you make it easy to develop quick and fast CR, and overall, just easy to tag you.

That said, that's actually something of what I think you should work on... Sometimes it's okay to let things take their time. It's okay to have characters be ambivalent or noncommittal around each other. idk, maybe I'm way off base with this, but I think you could do with letting relationships go more slowly (even if that is a hard thing to 'work on', necessarily).

[crackpotcrocker.livejournal.com]

Jorgen Von Strangle
Ash Kethcum
Denzel Crocker

[stripping.livejournal.com]

I really, really like how funny your characters are, it's wonderful to read.

...Sometimes Crocker's disjointed comments are a little hard to reply to (in ways other than 'wtf?'). D-does that count? I'm bad at this.

[eschatologist.livejournal.com]

Just this boy.

[vivi]

I love love love how thoughtful you are with everything, it's absolutely fabulous to see so much depth in a minor character, but I think you'd really benefit from tagging around more and taking chances on new CR.

[zanarkandsboy.livejournal.com]

Orz, too many people. I KNOW THAT I NEED TO WORK ON ANSWERING MY TAGS SOB and drop a few people or a game or so, four is a lot, but any concrit is much appreciated!

I play zanarkandsboy, awaken_vegnagun, noirnoshirayuki, mnkeywrenchjams, fogginurworlds, likesicecream, keybladedork, and affirmativerror

[stripping.livejournal.com]

...I was about to say 'I forgot we even had an Atom, maybe you should tag with him more' but then I realized he's kinda dead, so!

[ttlynotcable.livejournal.com]

Sol Badguy
Rock Howard
Nate Grey
Astharoshe Asran
Ragna the Bloodedge

[stripping.livejournal.com]

I really adore the no-nonsense lead characterness your guys bring to the com. Sol takes no guff from anyone, and Ragna isn't much for it either. They're really cool, to put it simply.

Who is Asthe and what is she doing on this list? Are they even a she? ...Yeah, you could maybe stand to tag with him/her a little more.

[pandorabox]

pansbox
brightstarshero
scarlet_magic
fallbymyhand
aquasports
ceilingshiro

in b4 'be more active with people who are not Kaito' orz

[vivi]

lmao uhhhhh. GOD I LOVE HOW FRIENDLY AND EASY TO PLOT WITH YOU ARE. ;3; You're just a joy to talk to and I never hesitate to bring one of your characters into a plot, because I know you'll add something great to it.

I do think you should be more active with people that aren't Kaito, lol, but I understand how that is... (looks meaningfully at her own activity) AND I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING ELSE FOR YOU TO WORK ON. SO. Just be cognizant of that, which you already are. /o/

[sexforbreakfast.livejournal.com]

Niwa Daisuke | lolcrayons
Dark | sexforbreakfast
Artemis Fowl | mal_honnete
Lazard Deusericus | falselineage
Riku | lol_mouseketeer

[vivi]

YOU. You are such a thorough RPer. You never shy away from what would keep things IC and you just, completely know how to handle things, or it always seems like it, anyway. *///* So confident.

That said, I'd love to see you tagging around and branching out more with your characters.

[cyberelric.livejournal.com]

Edward Elric
Touya Akira

.....:D

[vivi]

You--! Are a lovely, lovely person OOC and you just smash any social awkwardness out of the water. I don't even know how to say it, lol, but you're amazing to talk to and plot with and just so comfortable to (virtually) be around.

For your crit, I think you should be a little more deliberate with your tags. You do a great job with them, generally, but I feel as if I want a little more oomph and cleanness/sharpness out of them. It's more a writing style crit than anything else, so take it as you will. :|9

[autophoenix.livejournal.com]

{autophoenix} - Claire Bennet | Heroes

I CAN FINISH MY HTML TAGS.

[hislostlover.livejournal.com]

Lilith Sahl
Caterina Sforza
Jacob Black
Christine Daae

[vivi]

You are such a joy to tag with, ahhhhh. You are so quick and thorough and you handle the emotional aspects with aplomb.

You're... so impressive I actually find it marginally intimidating OOC, but that's probably more my issue than yours? So I don't really know what to say here on that failing at my own meme, amazing.

[vengeful-virtue.livejournal.com]

V
Dumbledore
Italy
Blind Mag
Bellatrix
Sirius
Pegasus

[vivi]

You play a lot of characters that have an edge to them, and you ride that edge very well, if that makes sense. Like keeping V mysterious and dangerous, and so on. It's really pretty impressive.

That said, I want to see more Sirius!! This is purely self-indulgent of me, but I love Sirius and want to stalk him everywhere. lmao. He's a social character and I think he'd be all over the community.

[sergeinotvodka.livejournal.com]

Tyki
Shito
Stein
Gale
Tseng
Sergei
Lang
Giriko

In b4 post moar orz

[vivi]

Holy shit you play a lot of characters when did this happen. UHHHHH god I don't even know what to say, I just fucking love your characters. Even the ones I don't know. I stalk them. You are such a dynamic writer and there's something really charismatic, almost, about your style - it's very engaging and I'm always itching to find more excuses to RP with you. XD

UH CRIT NOW. LET'S SEE. ...Yeah, I do have to say activity, again, but. I hate giving that as what people have to work on, because RL > RP and all. *///* I just can't think of anything else, orz.

[samuraiprosecutor]

Miles Edgeworth || samriprosecutor

[howdarktheblood.livejournal.com]

Tira
Terra
Dojima
Morrigan

I won't bite, I promise.

[flammatory]

I loooove threading with you, ffff. You always put a lot of thought and deliberation into your tags, and you don't compromise IC for anything, which I find very admirable.

I do think you can be intimidating OOC, because you come across as very serious at times, but not everyone needs to be constantly and overtly welcoming, so... It's just something to be aware of, I suppose.

[pink-protector.livejournal.com]

Aerith Gainsborough
Setsuna Meiou
Mattie/Canada

[phoenix-temple.livejournal.com]

Fuu, Chie, Travis, Fuuka XD Why not?

[stripping.livejournal.com]

You're very energetic as a mun, and you come up with new plots and ideas all the time, that's really exciting to watch!

I thiiiink you may have some characterization issues with Fuu. From what I hear she's supposed to be generally upbeat and cheerful, and from what I've seen she's sad nearly all the time. Also, as far as I can tell the plot of MKR is about going on a dangerous mission with little to no information for the sake of a good cause, and I'm not sure it's IC for Fuu to condemn that in the current plot.

[visestvita.livejournal.com]

Hello.

Wesker
Adachi
Excalibur
Rude
Apollo
Matt

HIT ME.

[stripping.livejournal.com]

I hate to say what everyone else is going to say but holy crap, Wesker and Adachi. I know enough of P4 to say that I'm pretty sure he's perfectly IC, and not only that, it's a really awesome interpretation of him. I know nothing about RE that I did not go and learn at least in part because your Wesker is all kinds of badass and snark and I need more of that in my life. And Wesker and Adachi counts as one thing, shut up. Characterization, that's it. Characterization is one thing.

...activity from everyone who isn't those two or Excalibur? I-I want to be able to go on rambles for all of your characters, but I really can't at the moment. They seem great, they just don't send me into frothing glee yet.

[goddamn-ironman.livejournal.com]

Not sure if there's much you can say for me, since I've only done his intro at this point, but if there's anything you'd like to point out to me, little or big, please feel free to. &hearts :>

[makinganote.livejournal.com]

Spike Spiegel
Ema Skye
Luna Lovegood
Russia
Ted Mosby
Hanatarou Yamada

HIT ME WITH YOUR BEST SHOT.

[vivi]

I love your writing style. It is so unique, almost abrupt and choppy, but you really convey the disjointedness of realistic thinking and it's revealing of the character without being intrusive into the narrative.

What you should work on is your confidence! You are an amazing, fabulous RPer, and I mean this truly, but I think sometimes you let yourself get in the way of how much you could accomplish.

[gemhunter.livejournal.com]

Okay.

Rouge the bat [this lj]
naive_lightning

[trinities]

Tamaki, Itsuki, Mileina, Nena, Sheryl, Yoh!

[hatsandguns.livejournal.com]

DO IT.

Joker
Emoticon
HAL-9000
Ryan Evans
Flapjack
Hikaru Sulu
Jayne Cobb

[hatsandguns.livejournal.com]

oh of course i use the non-paid account for this

PLEASE DO NOT CRIT ME PERSONALLY OR MY ACTIVITY IN GENERAL. I really want things about characterization, or maybe activity for one specific character instead of in general. (I'm currently on a road trip, so I haven't been nearly as active as usual, hence my request XD)

[halfthetrouble]

Devit
Phoenix