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adddictions2010-06-12 03:38 pm
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Tell people one thing you love about them and one thing you think they should work on.
One and one only! Keep it balanced, and tag around!
Obviously, participation is optional. Be nice, people. This is supposed to be constructive.
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Work on: Hoping to see some more Rei around. She's not a very active type in the first place, so I'm not sure how to suggest you do that, but perhaps the community could pick up her mid-series poem or something? I don't have any CR with her but I worry since you're so far along in canon what will allow her to post or respond to others. This maybe isn't a helpful suggestion so much as a fanboy's annoying demands for more Rei.
Love: Your Rei is amazing. It's my opinion that you make an excellent use of silence and non-response responses in a way that really feels like the series.. I think of how I'd try to capture Rei, and always think: "that feels really cold, but she actually has non-robotic feminine speech cues so that'd be really hard to write" and then you manage to make Rei feel disconnected but fragile at the same time.